*Speech Below Break*
The world of
contemporary nerd culture has gone through many changes in its short lifetime.
Once a subculture looked down upon as antisocial and strange, the view of the
subculture has since shifted. Now, it holds a high place in our mainstream
culture. From lame to fame, the words "nerd" and "geek"
have shifted from monikers of ridicule to titles of pride. Once afraid of being
perceived as a nerd, people now don outfits under the fashion fad of “geek
chic.”
Yet, not all is mega
mushrooms and purple rupees. Despite the facelift the subculture has gotten,
it’s inner workings have yet to catch up. The once famous “boys club” still
thumbs its nose at the world. And the door of the subculture is plastered with
a sign saying “No Girls Allowed.” While there are those who simply shrug and
say that it’s boys being boys, the level of gender inequality goes far beyond
basic playground exclusion and ridicule.
Morals based in bigotry
and prejudice are still widely prevalent in contemporary nerd culture. Instances
of harassment, threats, and both physical and verbal attacks are daily
happenings. These heinous parts of this subculture often are targeted toward
female nerds. Female nerds are shut down and silenced, often told that their
opinions don’t matter because of their sex. They are harassed and slandered
when participating in nerd culture events, called “whores” and “bitches” if
they ignore their harassers.
And nerds of different
sexualities and gender identities aren’t left out of the fray. Hateful words
such as “faggot” and “freak” are slung towards anyone who doesn’t fit right in
with the population’s majority.
There are those members
who turn a blind eye to these situations, stating that it’s commonplace. But,
there are those who have had enough. They have tried to bring about change
through traditional methods, but with little success. For every step forward,
they take two steps back. And it’s the reactions and retaliations enacted by
the subculture’s primarily white, heterosexual male population that put them
there.
But, what I'm here to
offer is a different type of solution. One that is disguised by a popular media
form in nerd culture much like the Trojan Horse of the past: an online comic.
The online comic The Royalty in the Other Castles is a
comic that is updated twice a month. Its story follows four roommates
throughout their daily journeys in the world of nerd culture. The scenarios
will range in seriousness from incidents of assault and harassment to
overdramatic fandom drama. The characters will span multiple spectrums of
identity, not only in Nerd Culture, but also on the sexuality and gender
identity spectrums. There will be humor in the comic, but there also will be
times of stoicism, keeping the tone of the comic balanced.
Through this media
lens, the audience is allowed a raw, honest window into what it’s really like
to be a nerd that doesn’t fit into the standard population type. Nothing will
be held back. I plan on shocking the audience with this comic. And it’s through
this raw lens that the story will help incite change.
The overall plot of The Royalty in the Other Castles follows
the daily lives of four roommates: Anne, Morrigan, Murphy, and Pat.
After months of looking
for an apartment near campus, Anne and her two friends Pat and Murphy are close
to giving up their search. It's not until Anne's older sister Morrigan gives
her a call saying that she found an apartment for a decent price that can house
all four of them. Although hesitant, Anne agrees. And Anne, Murphy, and Pat move
into the apartment.
Although the four
roommates come from different backgrounds, they relate to each other in two
ways: through their nerd identity and their treatment in the culture. Scenarios
ranging from discrimination and harassment to fandom drama and academic stress
are some of the more prevalent situations they will go through. There will be
ups and downs, but all around humor as Anne, Morrigan, Murphy, and Pat realize
that being a nerd is harder than it seems.
The primary topic
looked at in The Royalty in the Other
Castles is gender politics and nerd culture. I want to focus on this topic
because it has gained the most recognition in the public eye with such events
as GamerGate. Due to its popularity, I think it’s a good jumping off point for the
comic’s topic. Yet, even though gender politics and nerd culture is a primary
topic in the comic, the treatment and behaviors toward nerds of different
gender identities and sexualities will be touched on as well. Representing
these other spectrums will help show that it's not only female nerds who wear a
target on their back
The overall theme of
the comic will be serious, the comic allowing the audience a raw, honest lens
to look into this aspect of nerd culture. But there will be times of humor.
Even though the topics are supposed to incite change and conversation, it’s
important to keep the comic entertaining.
Every world is a stage,
and each of us are players. In The
Royalty in the Other Castles, the players come from different backgrounds.
Yet, they all are connected through their participation in nerd culture and
their attendance to NYU. They create a diverse group that spans the different
spectrums of gender, sexuality, and nerd culture.
And let me briefly
introduce them to you.
Anne Carey is a 21-year-old undergrad Theatrical Studies major
at NYU. She is a cissex female, meaning that she identifies with her biological
sex. And she is cisgender, meaning that she identifies with the correlating
spectrum on the heteronormative gender spectrum. She is heterosexual. Her nerd
culture affiliations are: casual gamer, fangirl, and cosplayer - a subculture
she has been a part of since she was 16 years old. She is the younger sister of
Morrigan Carey.
Morrigan Carey is
26-years-old. She is a cissex female and Genderqueer, meaning that she doesn’t
identify with the heteronormative spectrum of gender. She is bisexual. She got
her Bachelors of Arts in both Computer Sciences with a Focus in Game Design and
Graphic Design. And she is currently working on her Masters in Sciences in
Computer Sciences at NYU. Her nerd culture affiliations are: Professional League of Legends player and Game
Designer. She is the older sister of Anne Carey.
Murphy Quinn is a
22-years-old heterosexual undergrad Fine Arts and Theatrical Studies double
major. He is a Trans*Male - FtM - meaning that he is transitioning to become
male. He is Gender Fluid, also meaning that his gender identity fluctuates
along the gender spectrum. His nerd culture affiliations are: fanboy, comic
book artist, and comic book writer.
Pat Flynn is 20-years-old and is a cissex Male. He is Agender,
meaning that he identifies with no gender identity at all. He is a pansexual
undergrad Communications major at NYU. His nerd culture affiliations are:
fanboy, casual gamer, and cosplayer - a subculture he has been a part of since
he was 18 years old.
Now that you’ve met the
stars of this comic, let’s meet the people who bring them to life.
The Royalty in the Other Castles is a small time project that does not
require a village to make happen. The staff will be small, giving it a chance
to blossom and grow as the popularity of the comic does.
To start off, there
will be a small group of three or four people who will be the artists and
writers to create the content for each web comic strip. Along with that, there
will be handful of editors, web designers, and social media operators. This
will help manage the website where the comic strip will be posted as well as
keep the operations going.
It’s all well and good
to dream big about a project such as this, but the project can’t go further
than a thought unless there is funding.
After doing research, I
believe that it would be best to do most of our fundraising through a
Kickstarter account. Even though Kickstarter works best for people who already
have an audience, I think that a combination of social media outreach and
publicity as well as a compelling Kickstarter page will help us gain the funds
needed to get us going.
The money that is
raised will go towards equipment, software, and web hosting for the comic’s
production. We hope to raise the money through fun, interactive ways that
include the audience of the comic. The fundraising will also double as a way to
gain a larger audience, promoting the comic along the way. One of the ways I’ve
thought of is a Charity Livestream Sketch Show where the artists sketch out
some fun and interesting fan art for the comic. The participants in the
Livestream would have to option to donate to the comic’s production. The price
would be up to them, but the minimum would be a dollar. Another idea would be
to host interviews with popular nerd culture journalism media, promoting the
production and pushing people toward the Kickstarter page.
In the end, it will be
a combination of the promotion events and the fundraising that will help bring
this production to life.
Unlike most media
productions, the timeline for The Royalty
in the Other Castles is different. The main portion of the timeline will
have to do with the ongoing production of the comic. However, there are some
milestones that need to be met before we get to the final part of the
production. Because of this, I have decided to divide the timeline into three
parts.
The first part of the
timeline will be funding the project. Looking back at past endeavours, I expect
that this part of the timeline will take about a year and a half. This will
allow for an appropriate amount of time for the funds to be raised and for
enough exposure for the project to take place.
The next part of the
timeline will be to set up the production space and get everything that is
necessary. This portion of the production will take around two months. It will
allow us to purchase and set up the equipment, software, and studio space
before work is started on the first strip.
The final portion of
the timeline is the largest section. This portion has to do with the creation
and updating of the comic strip’s content.
The comic will be
updated twice a month. This will allow for the content creators to produce the
update as well as for the editors and production crew to make any necessary
changes. It is important to have this editing period due to the topics
discussed in the comic.
In the end, the overall
goals of the project are simple ones: to raise awareness, change minds, and
incite change. Through The Royalty in the
Other Castles, I want show the world a first hand look at what it’s like to
be the one with the target on their back through a raw and honest lens. To be
afraid to walk around a convention floor because of harassment. To need to lie
about your sexuality so you don’t get verbally attacked while playing video
games online. To see what it’s like to be silenced in a conversation because of
your sex or gender identity. The Royalty
in the Other Castles offers that chance all while making clever nerd
culture references along the way. By keeping the balance between lighthearted
entertainment and serious discussion, the entertainment allows for the audience
to want to read the comic further rather than get bored with the soap box it
could become.
Hi Hipster,
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry it took so long for me to comment on your presentation speech. My father's in the hospital so I've been struggling to keep up with my work and class schedule this week.
First of all you have a very detailed, thorough presentation. Just by watching your presentation I learned more about gender roles than I had previously known. In my opinion I think you're addressing an important, probably overlooked topic. I've always found irony in how self proclaimed nerds can often revel in discrimination.
In regard to your presentation your writing is well done. The actual recording is a little rough but that's natural. I've created educational videos in the past and I always have to call out vocal mistakes and edit them out in post production. The sound of the car in the background is a common one. Whenever I record my neighbors like to start their cars or mow their lawns.
Good work, I think this is developing rather well!
Hey there Undercover Hipster,
ReplyDeleteNice job! Overall, the speech is very informative, going into depth about the fundraising aspect of the project, and the basic characters. You give a few plot points of the overarching storyline, which is helpful, though I would like to hear a sample story arc or two – less imaginative people might now be able to picture what the tale will be like without a sample.
I like your format of introduction – problem – solution in the product – call to action. That said, you might want to take a look at this TED talk by Nancy Duarte:
http://www.ted.com/talks/nancy_duarte_the_secret_structure_of_great_talks
It gives the "science" behind the structure of great speeches, and may be helpful should you choose to edit this speech in the future. It's really interesting, I think, and could make this speech go from great to amazing ^_^
VM
The pitch assignment emphasizes the difference between brainstorming and a final pitch. Both of your pitches are interesting ideas, but they don't have the specifics yet that would make them compelling.
ReplyDeleteA documentary film that "follows a group of women" needs to become three or four specific women who participate in specific events. A proposal that tells me how these women will behave before you even have their names makes me skeptical. You make a lot of claims that tell me about the impact of this film without any description of technique. Will you use hidden cameras? How will you expose the truth? Lastly, "In The Line of Fire" is a Clint Eastwood film.
A pitch can be as easy as: "Costume Play": Four Women, Four Gamers, Four Hidden Cameras, and the Biggest Con of the Year.
The comic book pitch suffers from the same vagueness, until you expand it in your presentation. Again, when taking peoples' time, brevity is your friend. Twelve minutes is a long speech. You are two minutes in before you tell me this is about a comic book.
If you've never published a comic book before, it's hard to raise money without samples, artwork, or a script. Why propose big projects that cost a lot of money (and can get you in a lot of trouble) when you can start small and raise money as you build momentum. Learn what you are doing before you ask for thousands upon thousands of dollars. Kickstarter is never the first place to go; it is the last place to go.
Starting small could mean starting anywhere. You could write the story of the first comic. You could get that story down to a few sentences. You also don't have to fight your whole battle in your presentation. Let the comic book to do that. Your passion is an asset, but specific actions will garner money, not big themes.
You have a good clear speaking voice, but you are reading. After you cut the speech in half, memorize it to deliver it with even more freedom and confidence.
You don't have any names, not just of your characters, but of your human assets. Who are you and what is your credibility? Who else do you have on board? Do you have any famous comic book artists or people from the industry advising you? Who is the market for this comic? You also don't have any data on your market or any research numbers around producing a comic book.
Lastly, your slides only repeat your speech. This is never a good idea. One, you might end up reading the slides during the presentation instead of speaking to your audience. Two, a comic book presentation has plenty of other visuals that are more necessary.
To go from brainstorming to a presentation in three weeks is asking a lot. I really enjoyed the work you put into this Hipster. Well done.